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KinkyDem

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Wed Apr-07-04 03:03 PM
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5. It's a start

for battle armor, read (DO NOT SEE THE MOVIE) Starship Troopers. Especialy the bits about the fighting in the suit.

One other thing I will add, find an editor. I'm not saying that to be overly critical (I can't spell for shit and my grammar is pretty bad) just as a suggestion. Go ahead and pound out whatever comes and clean it up later, but get help with editing.

Post more. DO you have a chapter II yet?

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