Reply #3: I am not qualified to [View All]

[oneighty]

be a critic.

In my own writings I use as few words as possible. It is not a deliberate effort it is however the way I talk and write. I ignore rules of composition because I do not know them.

So you see I do not have much to offer.

My first thought upon reading was a quote from the Mozart movie wherein poor Mozart was told his music had "Too many notes." Perhaps you have too many words?

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