rbnyc
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Thu Oct-16-03 09:16 PM
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Edited on Thu Oct-16-03 09:17 PM by rbnyc
I think I still do, but in a raunchier way. In many ways I'm not as smart as I used to be, but even this has its gifts. For example, after reading Ted Kennedy's floor remarks tonight, these were my reflections on the Bush* Administration:
You lied. You suck. You're idiots. You fucked up. People are dying. You're profiteers. You screwed us.
And I thought, this is our perfect message. I want to make it into a song, a jingle. This is our freaking ad campaign. This is pretty damn clear.
EDIT: I never catch all my typos in preview!
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Thu Oct-16-03 09:22 PM
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1. Needs a beat ans a better flow. Also clean it up so children |
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can chant it. Good start though! Thanks
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Thu Oct-16-03 09:24 PM
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Edited on Thu Oct-16-03 09:25 PM by rbnyc
...it reminds me of that George Carlin cheer. I loved that cheer he used to do when I was a kid.
"Bat shit, rat shit, dirty old twat. 69 asshole tied in a knot. Hooray! Lizard shit! Fuck!"
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Thu Oct-16-03 09:25 PM
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3. Wanna see my all four-letter-word poem? |
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Edited on Thu Oct-16-03 09:26 PM by undisclosedlocation
Tough! Here it is anyway:
Four Word Play
Noun verb list fall from evil epic crap rite ripe fish myth lack zest feel lust grog wank then deaf kiss paid date fuck wary pope good jazz fart Deft hand come kill bomb womb tomb bury fury slay fear dire ride Fake king brat nice bozo neat liar pyre crib baby deny veto gaga saga lama piss doom poor dupe Want pony need home Stop that
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Thu Oct-16-03 09:27 PM
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Edited on Thu Oct-16-03 09:28 PM by rbnyc
I'm going to cut it up, put it in a different order, and use it for my new song.
:)
Okay, I really have to go now. My hubby is waiting for me. He thinks I want to run away with Ted Kennedy.
But I actually do really like your poem, and I love poetry enough to hate it. (EDIT: hate poetry that is, not your poem, which I love.)
Oh boy. I shouldn't have had that brownie.
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Fri Oct-17-03 12:00 AM
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5. Thanks! Sorry for delay; I got carried away by baseball madness |
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Even worse than brownies!
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