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Thu May-01-08 06:26 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (May 5/1/2008) |
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In A Country They'd Not Visited In Years
In a country they'd not visited in years, where there was an erupting tree whose sweet was like a kick in the heart's knees; where a river more muddy than clear dragged fat water insects which swam with spindly legs burdened by want and coo; where the boys and girls would flaunt, with scant cladding, abundant tans, and then some; where the sun-warmed marble steps made the snaky lounge easy as the air heating between them, the craving pair, until hungry for the other's tongue and neck they retired to their room alone to lick the meat from each other's bones.
Ross A. Gay
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Thu May-01-08 07:01 AM
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where the boys and girls would flaunt, with scant cladding, abundant tans, and then some; where the sun-warmed marble steps made the snaky lounge easy as the air heating between them,
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Thu May-01-08 05:33 PM
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:hi:
Your book went out today...
:D
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Thu May-01-08 05:44 PM
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6. you're the best, you know that? |
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Thu May-01-08 06:01 PM
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Thu May-01-08 06:09 PM
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8. so long as you're Top. |
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but i hear you're a solid 8.
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Thu May-01-08 07:25 PM
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Thu May-01-08 11:08 AM
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Wow!
Now here's an erotic poem!
Not one little bit explicit, but wham!
And beautifully done as well...
Thank you!
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Thu May-01-08 11:20 AM
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3. I'd like to be a fly on that wall |
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Edited on Thu May-01-08 11:20 AM by Inchworm
and how fitting for the lounge.
where the sun-warmed marble steps made the snaky lounge easy...
:thumbsup:
EDIT: forgot some dots
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Thu May-01-08 01:10 PM
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That's all I've got today. :-)
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