Reply #1: grammar nazi to the rescue [View All]

[TalkingDog]

I would would actually start with your request as it is quite forceful:

In the past several months the.... page under a supposedly liberal Michael Kinsley has become unreadable. The sorry state of the editorial pages is quite distressing. The editorial writing is (use more descriptive phrases here...why is it horrible?), the opinion columns are (lame, but again WHY?)...especially Joel Stien, who (explain what he does to bug you here).

Add to that a brutal cartoonist, Michael Ramirez and a condensed.... section. All in all a travesty. If the editorial pages do not show substantial improvement, I will be forced to cancel my subscription.


edited to grammar nazi my own grammar