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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 08:53 PM
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Haiku Challenge... For Poverty?
The library has issued a Haiku challenge, literary of course.

I"m no good at that sort of thing, so I'd like to ask for your help with this.

Pick a book that has a message about poverty, and write a Haiku, and I'll put it up on the board in the library. Get more awareness built, with a little bit of fun along the way.

Seventeen syllables.

Written in three

lines divided into

5-7-5

I look forward to your ideas!

Thanks!
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Systematic Chaos Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:10 PM
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1. Could I get some clarification?
You say "pick a book that has a message about poverty, and write a haiku". Does this mean that the haiku has to be about a book? Or can it just be a haiku about poverty in general?

Thanks.
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:15 PM
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2. Yeah, being a library, they are in the business of pushing books.
:)

right now I'm in love with two books.... Nickel and Dimed by Barbara Ehrenreich, and One Nation, Underprivileged/u], by Mark Robert Rank.

But I would have no idea how to make a Haiku of either!

Sorry I wasn't clear....

Other books I think of:

Street Lawyer, by John Grisholm

Milagro Bean Field War

The Overcoat by Nicolai Gogol

Les Miserables

Sorry I was unclear.... I wish I did poetry, I think this is a fun idea!
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1monster Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:41 PM
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7. Les Miserables
Valjean stole a loaf
And served nineteen years a slave
For starving sister

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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:46 PM
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9. Beautiful! You've been doing this for a while, right?
These are great.. thanks!

:applause:
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1monster Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 10:08 PM
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11. I've taught classes in Haiku.
:evilgrin:
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napoleon_in_rags Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:26 PM
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3. Haiku
The Jungle is by
Upton Sinclair and it says
poverty sucks eggs.

(I am bad with Haiku :( )
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:30 PM
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4. aw, I think it's good... but then, it could be that I have no taste.. ^_^
I just sent it to my librarian... we'll see what she says...

^_^

Thanks!!
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1monster Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:33 PM
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5. Two one stanza haiku; one three stanza haiku.
Edited on Thu Apr-03-08 09:35 PM by 1monster
Roof over our heads
Food for my children to eat
So little to ask

********************

Mail bring many bills
Pink slip in pay envelope
Wolf stands at the door

********************

Newpaper story
Hidden in woods behind mall
A small tent city

Tent city dwellers
Evicted by mall owners
No place left to go

Tents their only homes
Destroyed by the evictors
No more tent city

*********************

on edit: My haiku was based on a newspaper article, so, per your clarification, they don't quite make the grade.







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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:40 PM
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6. These are wonderful! Surely we can find a book to fit them to!
Hmmm, how 'bout Rachel And Her Children?

Really, these are very fine.. thanks!

:yourock:
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1monster Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:42 PM
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8. Thank you.
:blush:
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Fovea Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-03-08 09:52 PM
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10. Things
If you have more things
and I have less things than you
it means not a thing.
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Apr-04-08 11:06 AM
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12. That is so fine!
Kinda reminds me of George Carlin's "Stuff".

:hi:
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Xipe Totec Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Apr-04-08 07:09 PM
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13. Here is mine:
Grapes of wrath anew,
dustbowl is in Iraq now,
with poverty here.
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Apr-05-08 12:52 PM
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14. oooh, very good, and very moving!
Thanks!
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maryf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 03:08 PM
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15. Hard times
We need Studs Terkel
to explain what to do with
a new depression
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 03:11 PM
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16. That's GREAT!
And really fits with current headlines...

I've sent this one on to the librarian, too.

thanks!

:applause:
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maryf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 03:48 PM
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17. so glad you like it!
I'm a huge admirer of yours and am happy I can give a little to you back!
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 04:13 PM
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18. awww.......
:hug: :yourock: :hug:

You better be careful.. I'm the resident "jerk" around here, and I wouldn't want you to be shot as an accomplice!

:rofl:
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maryf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 05:40 PM
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21. I'll wear kevlar
I usually gravitate to "resident" jerks...
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 05:51 PM
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23. .
:rofl:

As someone else posted today, a bit of masochism is helpful...

:hi:
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 04:15 PM
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19. Welcome to DU, maryf!!
:toast: :party: :bounce: :woohoo: :pals: :toast: :party: :bounce: :woohoo:
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maryf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 05:38 PM
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20. Thanks!
I read alot more here than I write here, I get lost and can't find the threads again, but your welcome is very welcome!
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-06-08 05:50 PM
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22. once you have posted enough, you will have a thing called "MY DU" that keeps track of your
posts, so you can get to them easily.

Also, you can "bookmark" a thread, to come back to it.

That helps a lot.

Otherwise, it can be like wandering in the desert. :)

I'm glad you found your way back here! :hi:
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maryf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-07-08 05:22 PM
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24. that'll be probably a very long time!!
I did bookmark this thread anyway, My DU huh? It'll be more like My DUH! ;) Thanks!
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-07-08 05:57 PM
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25. Well, I was hoping your get your post count up, because I have a question for you for PM
and I can't PM you because you don't have enough posts yet.

sigh....
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maryf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-10-08 05:31 PM
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27. How many posts do I need?
A mutual friend of ours has my email addresses...if he catches this he can pm you those...best I think I can do???
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bobbolink Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Apr-08-08 08:39 PM
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26. Jes' so you know..... your haiku is up on the library board...
with the Studs Terkel book.

It looks really fine.

:yourock:
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maryf Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Apr-10-08 05:32 PM
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28. Fantastic!!
I'm not only an exhibited artist, but a poet now!! lol! Thanks!
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