HopeHoops
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Fri Sep-25-09 11:59 AM
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Oatmeal Thomas P. Shultz 23 Sep 09
Raisins, cinnamon apples, or syrup Choices to be made! A life of choices Raisins? Impatient attendants await; the choice? Cinnamon apples? Won't cooperate again Syrup Raisins, cinnamon apples, or syrup
Nicole? Natalie? Natasha? I no longer bother to remember Call a name A response comes, most times Raisins today?
The oatmeal settles, concrete more like For so much sleep, my lids are always weighted The sails of the corsairs, clouds on the horizon Seven tall oaks surround the moss-covered slopes of the inlet. Cinnamon apples tomorrow, I decide
Away on the ships I take leave of this place Dawn on the blue sea; refreshing A new life of new choices? Oatmeal No raisins, cinnamon apples, or syrup
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Ah, very nice!
The imagery is great...
I'm imagining a scene in a nursing home, where our subject is being asked which sort of oatmeal he or she wants...
By the impatient caregiver!
:hi:
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