CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Nov-07-09 02:17 AM
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“Wanting”
it coils up the serpent from the core
wraps around the throat
squeezes til the lust bursts
the poison from every pore
moistens the skin
makes it glow shimmer tremble
ready to be touched
but nobody’s
there
© MLC
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NYC_SKP
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Sat Nov-07-09 10:03 AM
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What a sensual build up... ...and a surprise ending.
:loveya:
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Nov-07-09 10:15 AM
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How about that?
And this is just how it showed up....last night!
Thanks, sweetie...
:loveya: too!
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Pool Hall Ace
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Sat Nov-07-09 06:29 PM
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I'm 3,000 miles away and I'm :blush:
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Nov-07-09 07:43 PM
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4. My dear Pool Hall Ace! |
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I'm so glad you found my little poem over here!
And I'm even gladder you enjoyed it, sweetie...
Thank you so much...
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Pool Hall Ace
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Sat Nov-07-09 08:37 PM
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5. The birdbath out front was frozen over this morning |
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I should have read this poem to it to heat it up! :D
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sat Nov-07-09 09:09 PM
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:rofl:
You might have made the neighbors wonder what the hell was going on!
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Pool Hall Ace
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Sun Nov-08-09 11:30 AM
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7. I've probably done sillier things! |
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:silly:
By the way, am I allowed to post in this group? I'm not really a poet.
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CaliforniaPeggy
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Sun Nov-08-09 11:55 AM
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8. Of course, you're allowed! |
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Some folks don't think I'm a poet either, lol!
Anyone can comment, sweetie...
And I'm so glad you are!
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